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If I Were Older

I want to be a hero and go to heaven. I want twenty three virgins and a palace made of brick and mortar; But our leader says I am too young yet to strap justice to my chest and die for Allah. So patiently I reload spent cartridges and make beds and prepare food for my brothers. brothers who march to what fate may greet them. Death come like splinters from a soft-speaking man with a massive stick. -For my friend Sgt. Brian Smith

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Date: 9/24/2009 7:49:00 AM
Very compelling, Geoffrey. I am sure you will see heaven one day, but for now enjoy your youth. The last line is quite powerful and I'm sure Sgt. Smith is grateful for this wonderful tribute. Love, Carolyn
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