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If I Were An Elephant

Oh, if I were an elephant
   I sure would march around and rant
      with loud and deep instructive roar
         demanding mostly to implore

my fellow elephants to find...
   for matriarchs and males combined,
      some ways to camouflage our prize
         and make them dull to human eyes.

Though we are dark, our tusks are white;
   stand out in leafage day and night.
      For them, we're martyred every day.
         Perhaps there is a better way?

When good men tag our floppy ears,
   they could then calm our deepest fears...
      and paint our tusks a camo green
         so through the brush cannot be seen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 12:43 PM
what a cute take on the contest theme, Sandra. This has been a most delightful contests from which to read entries.
Haight Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 7:23 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 7:41 PM
I love your poem, Sandra, camouflaging them would a blessing for them good luck in the contest Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 3:31 PM
Thank you so much, Eve! Hugs, Sandra
Krampe Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 11:52 AM
You wrote a fun poem about a serious problem - good luck on the contest, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 3:31 PM
Thank you very much, Agnes. A very sad and serious problem for sure. Hugs, Sandra
Turner Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Yes, Mrs Sandra. There are not many left due to poaching. Very sad. Love the write:)
Haight Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Yes, it is so sad, Daniel. Thank you for your nice comment. Sandra
Green Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 7:47 AM
The topic is definitely a sad one, actually heart breaking, but the solution is brilliant. Nicely done Sandra. Good luck in the contest.
Haight Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Thank you so much, Chris. Don't know if this horrible problem can ever be solved :( Sandra
Sacks Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 5:11 AM
A topic very close to my heart. I wish we could find the answer for these proud and magnificent beasts! An excellent write, Sandra and good luck in the contest! Hugs, Sheila
Haight Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 3:23 PM
Thank you very much, Shelia, for your visit and supportive comments. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 4:26 AM
- A good suggestion .... paint the tusks green ... let the elephants live in freedom - Good luck in the contest, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 3:20 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lisa! Hugs, Sandra
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