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If I Were An Elephant

If I were water,I would never become ice If a plant,only wanted to be lively rice If Rice,I would be harvested twice If Tomato,be sweet in every slice If doubted between Good and Evil I would be Nice If I were an Elephant,I would never fear of Mice

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Deborah Burch

Date: 1/19/2017 8:35:00 PM

Lol!!! Too cute!! bahram!! Well done friend!!! :) Hugggs. Deb

Darren White

Date: 12/11/2016 11:40:00 PM

Heh :) I was wondering what your little poem would lead up to, and the last line made me chuckle :) Good luck in the contest.

Bahram Sediqi
Date: 1/23/2017 11:28:00 AM

Thank you. But I guess I should mark the correct poem type to be allowed to enter any poem contest.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/6/2016 2:22:00 PM

Made me smile Bahram:-) hugs jan xx

Bahram Sediqi
Date: 12/7/2016 1:22:00 PM

Thank you. I have just updated my poem.

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/6/2016 1:31:00 PM

Hi Bahram. : ) If I were an elephant, I'd step right on them twice.

Bahram Sediqi
Date: 12/7/2016 1:23:00 PM

I have updated my poem.