Bj Legros Kelley Poet Rhyme

If I Were a Flower

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                            Joyfully soaking in sunny gold rays
                             Lifting my leaves in Joyful praise
                             Turning my face to see the light
                              Asleep in a garden bed @ night
                               Cheerful visitors come to me
                                The butterfly, a honey bee
                                     Petals   of    yellow
                                      I'm really mellow
                                       A delight 2 birds
                                        In a few  words
                                        Nectar  &  Seed
                                        A  friend indeed
                                        Hour   by   hour
                                       If I were a flower

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Sam Kauffman June 13, 2021 at 10:33 AM BJ - you are a gracious flower! Your words delight my heart with their reflection of a selfless love through the image of a selfless flower asking only sunlight, friends, water and returning these gifts in "joyful praise." This would be wonderful in a church service or for youth ministry! Sending you many floral blessings. Love the shape! Bj Legros Kelley June 13, 2021 at 7:56 PM Wow, thank you so much! I would really be honored if this was used in church, or youth, that would be a sweet blessing! Your kind words truly lift my heart.

Greg Gaul June 12, 2021 at 5:31 PM This is a crafty, clever treatment bursting with imagination full throttle. Well done. Bj Legros Kelley June 13, 2021 at 7:54 PM Thank you Greg! It was fun. I was surprised that I was actually able to create it. I love my flowers, and have plenty of opportunity to watch the joy they offer all about them!

Jan Allison January 30, 2021 at 5:00 AM this is absolutely charming and so creative BL!!:-) I love it:-) hugs Jan xx Bj Legros Kelley January 30, 2021 at 9:29 AM Thank you Jan! I had a lot of fun creating this one :-) <3