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If I Was Thor Son of Odin

Hammer strikes, thunders emerge ripping dark skies to burn Satan's toys___nukes


Aug 29, 2020
17 syllables ~Monoku
If I Am A Super Heroine-Hero Poetry Contest

Placement: 01

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Emilia James

September 14, 2020 at 3:37 PM

Enjoyed your Monoku thank you. Would be great to see Satan's toys gone. Congratulations on your win. Emilia : )

Paghunda Zahid

September 14, 2020 at 10:12 PM

Thanks :)

Susan Ashley

September 12, 2020 at 5:27 PM

Striking imagery, Paghunda. I love the title and your monoku - very powerful! They that could rid the world of Satan's toys would be a mighty hero indeed! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paghunda Zahid

September 12, 2020 at 10:24 PM

Thank you Susan. We really need to get rid of those toys.

Andrea Dietrich

September 1, 2020 at 3:25 PM

would love to see the end of Satan's nukes!! Congrats in the contest.

Paghunda Zahid

September 1, 2020 at 7:33 PM

Thank you Andrea. I would love that too.

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 1, 2020 at 8:13 AM

- Congratulations you are a Super Heroine, Paghunda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paghunda Zahid

September 1, 2020 at 7:32 PM

Thanks Anne

Jennifer Proxenos

August 31, 2020 at 6:38 AM

Greek mythology is fascinating Paghu nda, but then again, every country has its folklore and ancient history - I am a true historian, should have been an archaeologist! Thor is a mighty God, great write - good luck. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Paghunda Zahid

August 31, 2020 at 12:16 PM

You can still write poems about them. Thor is my favorite too.