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The 20 focus areas listed:

1. No war
2. End racism
3. Environment (green earth)
4. Education
5. Healthcare
6. Housing
7. End poverty, hunger
8. Encourage entrepreneurship 
9. Fine arts
10. Space
11. Solar energy
12. Love as religion
13. Judicial reforms
14. Gun control
15. Drugs abolished
16. Prostitution abolished
17. Push for single world government 
18. Defence preparedness as deterrent
19. Disaster management 
20. External affairs, diplomacy

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Awakening the country from stupor, we stop all military manoeuvres, erasing racial hatred from our home, that all human beings, fearlessly roam, greening the earth, leading by example, love of humanity, be our mantle, focus on education and healthcare, home for each soul, free from poverty snare, whilst encouraging entrepreneurship, finer soul uplifting arts, our flagship, space and solar energy, our focus, love our religion, along Gods locus judicial reforms for trials made speedy, food for the needy, jail for the greedy, guns, drugs and prostitution all must go, with our ethics built on love throb mellow, mooting single world governance in peace, weaponised such, that no foe we appease, disaster management a focus zone friendly with neighbours, faults quick to atone, thus an iron fist in a velvet glove, strong as lion, yet gentle like a dove. 09-February-2021 Written for ‘If I was president’ poetry contest Sponsor: Matt Caliri (22 lines, Syllabic rhyme)

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Date: 4/9/2021 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.....your idealism would be a perfect world, wouldn't it? Take Care, Paulette
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Date: 4/8/2021 7:10:00 AM
I concur with your list. But I doubt we'll ever see meaningful gun control reforms unless it affects a powerful Senator personally with a loss. Congratulations on your win!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/8/2021 7:11:00 AM
numbers one, two and seven are sooo important.
Date: 3/22/2021 7:01:00 AM
Congrats! I believe that a perfect government is possible since such is assured by the Almighty God. Thanks for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
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Date: 3/22/2021 8:10:00 AM
Well said, Beata! Not only single world government but singular mind of God individuated earth beings is the actualised reality in more advanced realms of love and light, though it seems fanciful to sceptics. Take the Pleiadians for example. The Baha’i faith advocates this too, right here, right now.
Date: 3/20/2021 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations seeker, on another top win, brilliantly executed poem for the job at hand, and a perfect look at a utopia, Cheers David
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Date: 3/20/2021 9:01:00 PM
Thanks David! :)
Date: 3/19/2021 12:52:00 PM
congrats on your top win! You covered all the points well! you must send this to Kamala Harris!
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Date: 3/19/2021 6:29:00 PM
Ah! She is at the helm of affairs now, isn’t she?
Date: 3/19/2021 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win. Wish you were really president. Take care,Rama
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Date: 3/19/2021 6:28:00 PM
Thanks Rama!
Date: 2/10/2021 8:15:00 PM
Superb goals + notable vision for a stellar presidency. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 2/10/2021 8:49:00 PM
Thank you, Brian!
Date: 2/9/2021 11:48:00 PM
Glad you are not!
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Date: 2/9/2021 11:51:00 PM
Reason to celebrate then! The drinks are on me!
Date: 2/9/2021 1:37:00 PM
number 17 I am not fond of, but of course all these are lofty ideals if only the world were not so corrupt. I wish there were a person on this earth who were capable of leading us in all these fine things for society. Do you think it is even possible? Great writing!
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Date: 2/9/2021 6:09:00 PM
It certainly is possible! When ... is another matter!
Date: 2/9/2021 11:40:00 AM
Wouldn’t that be great. Peace in every heart and love in every soul roaming this earth... great write, Seeker!
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Date: 2/9/2021 6:07:00 PM
A step beyond, connects each to universal mind! I didn’t touch on that, thinking it would be overkill!
Date: 2/9/2021 11:10:00 AM
...andt...get rid of that divisive two party 'us against them' federal crap and set up three four or five federal parties to represent people on all levels...stan sand
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Date: 2/9/2021 6:05:00 PM
Politics is no longer a bad word, if suffused with love
Date: 2/9/2021 5:06:00 AM
These are great words indeed. I love the poem. It is a sure winner. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 2/9/2021 5:22:00 AM
Thanks Regina! One borderless world, with love as the dominant vibration for mankind, is indeed a desire in all our hearts!

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