On my way to visit my siblings in Georgia and Florida. I haven't seen some of them in years. But, I am very nervous... I hate flying (lol)
If I wake up... eating peaches And I'm still walking... in my brown shoes Then I'll be visiting my sister... in Atlanta And I'll be singing... some Georgia blues If I wake up... eating avocado And pass an orange orchard... along the way Then I'll be visiting... my other siblings About an hour... from Tampa bay But if my eyes... don't see no sunrise And my soul... is flying high Then I'll wake up... eating angel cake And see the sunset... when I die So So I made it... to Atlanta Visited a town... known as Helen And I woke up... eating peach cobbler With a side... of watermelon Then I made it... to hot weather Visited a town... known as Spring Hill And I woke up... eating alligator But it left me... feeling ill So my eyes... had seen the sunset From Atlanta... to Tampa Bay And I woke up... visiting my siblings And watched the sunrise... along the way
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