If I Ruled the World

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If I Ruled The World Proving souls mettle life elapsed that being in disaccord, Let us confirm the presence of each other multi-colored, Give a righteous opportunity for all to justly share, Equitably, separate terms on a wing and a prayer, Reinvent a world from disarray also disillusion, Let all be convinced in a better future, hearts infusion, Enjoying fashioned comfort together and security, Truly, rooves o'er heads, bellies well-nourished, lifetime surety, Laborers lifestyle concludes with an automated new world, Encountering goodness, nature, others, set in a dreamworld, Disproving spoils of Earth and that genuine malevolence, Relieved ills, ensure benevolence, I hope its prevalence. 2020 August 25 *10th Place* If I Ruled The World ~~Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/25/2020 3:42:00 PM

There is always several layers of depth in your writes, William! I always read them several times for the depth to reveal itself. Enjoyed tis very much. Good luck in the contest!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/25/2020 7:47:00 PM

Sorry, commentary glitches rolls on, Sam, I somewhat interject resigned reality midst preferred purpose, I set the spark they make the flames. 'Tis an easy road for wants to fester, necessity be the drive for innovativeness to prosper, my extended courtesies to you and yours, Sam, stay well and Aloha! William