If I Only Knew My Dad

This is a story about a man , I believe, conspired to drive me Mad
A ghost, a phantom, formed in the imagination of my Childish mind
So long ago: to protect him from scrutiny I changed his name to : Dad
The mirage of my youth : He’s tall and stately, dapper, and refined
Wavy brown hair with a tinge of curl, dimples that grow with his smile
Winter gray steel blue eyes, shining, radiating unconditional : LOVE
A compassionate man, congenial and friendly and he goes the extra mile
If You see my hallucinatory delusion , a picturesque symbol of LOVE

TELL HIM I AM SAD and I WOULD BE SO GLAD IF I ONLY KNEW MY DAD

 Inspired by and Dedicated to Carolyn Devonshire for Her " D A D "
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Breidenthal Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 8:51 PM
And yet another favorite! This was an incredible piece--enough said! Always, Laura
Chachere Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 8:32 PM
I think i see your dad in his son's smile. Wow, you look so much like him now.(: who ever he may be. we all need a child side to us, its a good thing. i love you always big bro. -Always&Forever your sister spirit Lynn
Christian Avatar
March 19, 2009 at 9:23 AM
awww this is a great poem but a little sad too, i kew my Dad but i did not get chance to know my mum properly she left home when I was 11 so I can uderstand theese words very clear. we all have our Father in heaven who will always be our eternal dad, God bless you from diane, I am looking forward to reading more of your poems they so encouraging.
Reynolds Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 4:31 PM
So sweet of you, but o' so sad. I never knew my dad either, and the only step dad I got was a real life psychopath. love, Kristin
Winter Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 12:53 PM
This tugs at my heart. Every boy needs his dad, although I know that isn't always the case, as I know some dads are not very good dads. I'm sorry. Very emotional and powerful write. Love & hugs, Shar
Ginn Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 12:15 PM
How sweet of you HG to dedicate this to Carolyn. A hullucinatory delusion- quite an interesting term. Nice job HG
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