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If I Only Could

Bars hold back her fleeting touch
where faint feelings meant hope and brought
inspiration when pieces puzzled a daggered heart

Diamonds shone bright on a worthless day
appearing in starlit eyes

if only I could . . .

Turn into that beautiful blue jay
the one that sings an endearing song
and sit outside your window sill
playing a tune for you all day long

You surely would notice
and dance about the day
leaving all your worries in the breeze
where they could simply float away

Out back beyond the old oak trees
growing in the recesses of your view
where the pretty wildflowers sway
I'll be with the Gilia looking out for you

I'd sit out in the garden
and smile up at you
watch you ray of goodness
in everything you do

You surely would notice
and dance about the day
leaving all your worries in the breeze
where they could simply float away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/2/2016 12:11:00 AM
Full of joyous sights and sounds ... Nice ...
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Date: 11/1/2016 9:39:00 PM
I have always enjoyed and admired pretty birds!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 9:51:00 PM
Me too
Date: 11/1/2016 3:46:00 PM
Tim, knowing you like I do, I'll bet you brighten up a lot of people's days. Love the uplifting poem.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 5:51:00 PM
Thanks DT I sure do try.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 5:50:00 PM
Date: 11/1/2016 2:27:00 PM
Sometimes I wish I am that blue jay Tim..Just happy that I could sing and fly my wings... Any melody of a bird is soothing any time..A fave to this lovely poem.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 5:47:00 PM
It would be exhilarating. Thanks so much Charma
Date: 11/1/2016 2:13:00 PM
Tim, you could come and play for me any day, with or without the "bluejay" suit. When people are sad or lonely, having someone who cares enough to try to brighten their world is quite a reward. Just love the way you create the uplifting imagery here.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 5:46:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn. Just a kind word or smile can help.
Date: 11/1/2016 12:24:00 PM
Beautiful Tim if only we could be that bird on a branch watching over her and she would notice.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 5:40:00 PM
Thanks Chris. I would hope so.

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