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If I Listened

If I listened would I hear the trill of peace Sense the presence of its calm Become the hum of gently tuned violin strings Quavering in erotic fulfillment Would the song of dancing thistles hold me captive Allow its swaying tremolo to consume me And clouds, oh distant clouds, What mysteries would you share Shaped within your wind-blown pantomime Perhaps the eyes forever questions Must be shielded To allow the music of a raven’s wings To share their black-silk feathered tune Or ripples strum their fingers Gently on a distant shore Or is it in this listening That I become What I have heard

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Date: 4/3/2024 12:16:00 PM
what an enchanting yet thought provoking piece John, i especially love "Perhaps the eyes forever questions Must be shielded To allow the music of a raven’s wings To share their black-silk feathered tune Or ripples strum their fingers Gently on a distant shore" hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/31/2024 8:33:00 PM
I find this poem deep and enchanting.
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Date: 3/31/2024 12:10:00 AM
This is absolutely gorgeous, makes one take a minute to listen, to all that which is around! How beautifully youv delivered this dear john! Pleasure reading this one
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John Lawless
Date: 3/31/2024 8:21:00 AM
soft sounds to beguile and impress an Empress....
Date: 3/30/2024 5:04:00 PM
a thought-provoking ending to your poem with its outstanding imagery (wind-blown pantomime) The last 3 lines truly left me breathless, and I'm still pondering the question you posed. Outstanding job, John. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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John Lawless
Date: 3/31/2024 8:18:00 AM
Well, Sara, we all know what a double edged sword those last three lines wield and yet.....Appreciate you kind words and support
Date: 3/30/2024 10:24:00 AM
Beautiful and lilting John
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John Lawless
Date: 3/31/2024 8:16:00 AM
Thank you DD....a bit of lilt is a good thing

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