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If I Knew Your Name

I gazed at you as if you were mine. Not knowing that truly you are one of a kind. Gasping as if I were drowning in the deep blue sea. Wondering if you felt the same way about me. Starting to move, starting to smile. The way you work it, I like your style. If you ever wanted to get a good guy. Girl don't even hesitate to try. To call me the one who saw you first. So that I can get past this worldly thirst. Of urging for you, the one whom in love with I became. Only girl only if i knew your name.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/26/2011 2:46:00 PM
Thank you all for your thoughts on this poem but i also except constructive criticism.
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Date: 2/26/2011 1:00:00 PM
tempting poem. welcome to poetry soup!! karen croft
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:21:00 PM
Well expressed thoughts of passionate feelings, kordarius
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