If I Knew Your Name

I gazed at you as if you were mine.
Not knowing that truly you are one of a kind.
Gasping as if I were drowning in the deep blue sea.
Wondering if you felt the same way about me.
Starting to move, starting to smile.
The way you work it, I like your style.
If you ever wanted to get a good guy.
Girl don't even hesitate to try.
To call me the one who saw you first.
So that I can get past this worldly thirst.
Of urging for you, the one whom in love with I became.
Only girl only if i knew your name.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Parker Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 2:46 PM
Thank you all for your thoughts on this poem but i also except constructive criticism.
Croft Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 1:00 PM
tempting poem. welcome to poetry soup!! karen croft
Mehta Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 6:21 PM
Well expressed thoughts of passionate feelings, kordarius
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