If I Die Young

If I die young would you buried me in place filled with flowers ?
If I die young would you stay by my side, holding me tight for hours ?
If I die young would you kiss my lips  before I fly away ?
And please don't cry cause everything will be okay...
I know that you hate to hear from me these wordsBut time can be deceiving and stab me with his sword
Believe me I don't wanna let you a lone
But I'll make sure you'll have someone by your side in case I've gone
I was a writer , I was a singer you were my lyrics you were my song
I didn't have home, you were my home we are belong
So if I die young would you buried me in place filled with flowers? 
If I die young would you stay by my side, holding me tight for hours?
 If I die young would you kiss my lips before I fly away ?
And please don't cry cause everything will be okay...
Sometimes I feel your hands getting around my waist
Kiss me one more time and I'll show you , I haven't forgot the taste
Your a true love that I once had
And saying goodbye to it , is what's making me bad
I don't need a therapy , I don't need a cure
When I had you , I had every thing and more
So if I die young would you buried me in place filled with flowers?
 If I die young would you stay by my side, holding me tight for hours? 
If I die young would you kiss my lips before I fly away?
 And hunny don't worry cause everything will be okay....


I wrote this poem after I heard (if I die young song) I liked it so much but I couldn't memorize it so I've decided to make my own version, hope you like it.

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Date: 1/29/2016 1:40:00 AM
If you die young I will bury you in a fire of pure love, hold you to my quaking chest until my heart drums you into heaven, kiss you jealously as I breathe my desperate love into your body...I see this song in my heart, oh sadly beautiful it is Dalia. I would love hear you sing this poetic song to me woman...J.A.B. A FAV!!
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/30/2016 6:37:00 AM
Thank you very much justin , your romantic spirit shows very well in your sweet sweet words , much appreciated, hugs / / :)
Date: 1/17/2016 10:28:00 AM
surely it's beautiful...the die YOUNG theme isn't beautiful though LOL...excellent write Dalia
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/17/2016 11:28:00 AM
Hhhhhhhhhhhhhh , thanx dear , it's originally a song , you should hear it some day , hugs / / :)
Date: 1/7/2016 8:32:00 PM
This is a seven Dalia. It is a beauty that sings into every heart. It is a story to tell on mortality's string. This is excellent work Dalia. Let it sing into my Faves so i may hear it when i so wish. I say BRAVO!!!!! to Dalia, the creator and singer of beauty....Vladislav
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/7/2016 8:38:00 PM
Oh my dear I'm really truly honored by these sweet sweet words , u have no idea how much it means to me , I really do appreciate ur lovely comment and ur delightful visit , I'm glad u liked it , hope I be able to serve more poems that u and the dearest soup family is gonna like , much appreciated and hugs / / :)
Date: 10/20/2015 12:52:00 AM
I don't need a therapy , I don't need a cure When I had you , I had every thing" So beautiful....... Dalia
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 10/20/2015 5:44:00 AM
Thank u very much my friend, I'm glad u liked it.... :)
Date: 10/15/2015 12:23:00 PM
Hey Dalia, you are strongly affected by songs. This is good for you, but I prefer when everyone has his/her own way or taste. your own words would be nicer and different. Keep it up!
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 10/15/2015 12:28:00 PM
I know that , I have alot of poems written in my way not inspired by songs check sand storm or lovely wind or my dark sky 3 or 2 of my poems only affected by songs but anyways I appreciate your lovely comment...thank u very much... :D
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