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If I Die Young

If I die young would you buried me in place filled with flowers ? If I die young would you stay by my side, holding me tight for hours ? If I die young would you kiss my lips before I fly away ? And please don't cry cause everything will be okay... I know that you hate to hear from me these wordsBut time can be deceiving and stab me with his sword Believe me I don't wanna let you a lone But I'll make sure you'll have someone by your side in case I've gone I was a writer , I was a singer you were my lyrics you were my song I didn't have home, you were my home we are belong So if I die young would you buried me in place filled with flowers? If I die young would you stay by my side, holding me tight for hours? If I die young would you kiss my lips before I fly away ? And please don't cry cause everything will be okay... Sometimes I feel your hands getting around my waist Kiss me one more time and I'll show you , I haven't forgot the taste Your a true love that I once had And saying goodbye to it , is what's making me bad I don't need a therapy , I don't need a cure When I had you , I had every thing and more So if I die young would you buried me in place filled with flowers? If I die young would you stay by my side, holding me tight for hours? If I die young would you kiss my lips before I fly away? And hunny don't worry cause everything will be okay.... I wrote this poem after I heard (if I die young song) I liked it so much but I couldn't memorize it so I've decided to make my own version, hope you like it.

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Justin Bordner

Date: 1/29/2016 1:40:00 AM

If you die young I will bury you in a fire of pure love, hold you to my quaking chest until my heart drums you into heaven, kiss you jealously as I breathe my desperate love into your body...I see this song in my heart, oh sadly beautiful it is Dalia. I would love hear you sing this poetic song to me woman...J.A.B. A FAV!!

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/30/2016 6:37:00 AM

Thank you very much justin , your romantic spirit shows very well in your sweet sweet words , much appreciated, hugs / / :)

White Sage

Date: 1/17/2016 10:28:00 AM

surely it's beautiful...the die YOUNG theme isn't beautiful though LOL...excellent write Dalia

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/17/2016 11:28:00 AM

Hhhhhhhhhhhhhh , thanx dear , it's originally a song , you should hear it some day , hugs / / :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/7/2016 8:32:00 PM

This is a seven Dalia. It is a beauty that sings into every heart. It is a story to tell on mortality's string. This is excellent work Dalia. Let it sing into my Faves so i may hear it when i so wish. I say BRAVO!!!!! to Dalia, the creator and singer of beauty....Vladislav

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/7/2016 8:38:00 PM

Oh my dear I'm really truly honored by these sweet sweet words , u have no idea how much it means to me , I really do appreciate ur lovely comment and ur delightful visit , I'm glad u liked it , hope I be able to serve more poems that u and the dearest soup family is gonna like , much appreciated and hugs / / :)

Md Alzhrani

Date: 10/20/2015 12:52:00 AM

I don't need a therapy , I don't need a cure When I had you , I had every thing" So beautiful....... Dalia

Dalia Shahein
Date: 10/20/2015 5:44:00 AM

Thank u very much my friend, I'm glad u liked it.... :)

Black Matta

Date: 10/15/2015 12:23:00 PM

Hey Dalia, you are strongly affected by songs. This is good for you, but I prefer when everyone has his/her own way or taste. your own words would be nicer and different. Keep it up!

Dalia Shahein
Date: 10/15/2015 12:28:00 PM

I know that , I have alot of poems written in my way not inspired by songs check sand storm or lovely wind or my dark sky 3 or 2 of my poems only affected by songs but anyways I appreciate your lovely comment...thank u very much... :D