If I Could Tell You

If I could tell you, how much I love you..
The stars, the universe, all would be so less to give you!

If I could tell you, I dream about you every second,
And that sweet smile on your face makes me feel like I am in heaven!

If I could tell you, that my heart constantly beats your name..
Without which, my body would be completely lame..

If I could tell you, tears flow down my eyes by the thought of losing you..
And I am ready to quit this world if I am forced to live without you..

If I could tell you, why on earth am I living, 
Then for you, would be the only answer
Which keeps me bright and shining!

If I could tell you, my feelings for you are totally true and pure..
I am madly in love with you, which any medicine can never cure!

If I could tell you, what am I without you, has no answer..
And I promise to take care of you for the entire life, like a lancer!

If I could tell you, that I thoroughly love your idiosyncrasy..
And being with you gives me immense pleasure and I am filled with unbelievable ecstasy!

If I could tell you, you are the whole world to me, me soul, my breath, my life..
And I would be the happiest man in this world if you would ever be my wife!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/28/2024 1:24:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 1:00:00 PM
nice to see this one again. Linda
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Date: 12/24/2015 12:57:00 PM
SIDDHARTH, a pleasure to read :) have yourself A wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year....... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 2/22/2015 6:07:00 PM
Siddharth, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Siddharth Kulkarni
Date: 2/23/2015 1:31:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Linda! Will always try to give my best. :)
Date: 2/22/2015 2:57:00 PM
Siddharth, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, enjoy the coming week **SKAT**
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Siddharth Kulkarni
Date: 2/23/2015 1:42:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Skat! This indeed was a great news to start my week! :-)
Date: 2/22/2015 8:14:00 AM
A simple yet a very soulful piece of writing.. and well ended. Loved the close! Congratulations Siddharth and thank you for this poem!!!
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Siddharth Kulkarni
Date: 2/23/2015 1:49:00 AM
Hi Gautami, a big thankyou for considering me! This was my first ever post and first ever contest. Thanks for the contest, you are really motivating new poets. Thank you!!! :-)
Date: 2/18/2015 10:46:00 PM
Siddharth, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Siddharth Kulkarni
Date: 2/23/2015 1:39:00 AM
I am surprised by the attention Poetry Soup gives to new poets. All thanks to you! This is a great place to meet new poets and be inspired to write more. And, thanks for being my first Poetry soup Friend! :-)
Date: 2/18/2015 10:16:00 PM
Siddharth, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Siddharth Kulkarni
Date: 2/23/2015 1:34:00 AM
Thanks for the warm welcome! Being new to poetrysoup, really happy to see your response. Will surely participate in your contests. Thankyou! :)
Date: 2/17/2015 10:41:00 AM
wow... was that a confession? .. nice write
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Date: 2/23/2015 1:33:00 AM
Thankyou! And yeah, you can say that. :)
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