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I sit amongst the lavender with thoughts of him in his arms melting firmly in the moonlight dim. His lips upon mine as my body would ignite; my blushed face buried in his neck as he squeezed tight. He did not need to tell me twice that he loved me, for it was in his smile for all the world to see. He was the bright skies that made me rise at sunrise, the caring breath in my lungs that made the earth rise. Thought of waking up without him terrifies me; if I could rewind time to bring him back to me. 9/27/2018

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Date: 10/22/2018 4:43:00 PM
Sadly beautiful, if we only could rewind time. Your heart speaks.
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Date: 10/12/2018 11:17:00 AM
Wonderful use of rhyme and form to express your heart.
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Date: 10/11/2018 7:41:00 PM
Lovely, Eve. Delightful imagery. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 10/10/2018 10:04:00 PM
Hi Eve, a write that has come straight from your heart, shining in the beauty of its love. I have also thought, "If Only I Could Turn Back Time." Your beautiful thoughts reach out Always your love shall live on in your thoughts and your heart, always with you. Such beautiful thought Eve. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 10/5/2018 6:10:00 AM
if only.. Congratulations on place in the contest..
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Date: 9/29/2018 1:50:00 AM
I am so glad that you found each other; I know two women who never found their love, and they are lamenting it now. You have so much to think of and smile about and be glad about, and you have a person waiting in heaven, which they do not have. A sweet and loving tribute. I am sorry for your loss. Keep writing about it; I am told that it helps.
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Date: 9/28/2018 10:46:00 PM
Eve, your remembrance write is deeply compelling. Oh to have such a love and to somehow let it slip away.. heartbreaking!!
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Date: 9/28/2018 10:45:00 PM
Warm and loving sentiments; he must've been something wonderful in your life. A wonderful loving pen.
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Date: 9/28/2018 5:17:00 PM
Every cemetery proves love outlasts everything else. Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/28/2018 1:26:00 PM
So moving and beautiful Eve. I do hope that can find some little comfort in your lovely memories xxoo
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Date: 9/28/2018 1:42:00 AM
This is so beautiful Eve, I am at a loss of words! :) A Fav
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Date: 9/27/2018 11:08:00 PM
A beautiful dedication Eve, from your heart. If only we could rewind time, but you have wonderful memories ,hold on to those dearly and yes he lives on in your heart. Tom
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