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If I Could Have a Word With God

If I could have a word with God I’d tell him I’m not pleased Throughout the years he’s toyed with me He tempted and he teased He’d lead me up that primrose path Then with my goal in sight Spins me round a dozen times And turn out every light Seems to me whenever I’m About to be in clover Someone pulls the rug out And I have to start all over So please God if you’re listening I’ve never asked for much The next time I’m successful Don’t kick me in the crotch © John W Fenn 18-08-2009

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Simone Segal

Date: 11/3/2009 3:33:00 PM

I like your style of poetry, I have the answer to this poem, take a look at my poem Brim Your Minds Cup, love Simone

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/31/2009 3:47:00 AM

Think that you are blaming the wrong person. Like the way that you presented the topic. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/25/2009 8:44:00 AM

Your sense of humor in the last few lines gave me a great laugh, John. I guess many of us have felt this type of angst, but you know how to express it so wittily! I'm a big fan of your work, so this is another for my faves. Love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/25/2009 2:19:00 AM

Hi John, I see you're still talking to Him. And that's a good thing. Those kicks... all part of the refining process. Take a look at poor Ole Job. Painfully, he passed the test and remained true to God. (Even though he wished to be dead. Now that's feeling bad...) Look at it this way. You became a stronger spirit with each spin. God has good things in store for you. Good luck in the contest. Lovingly, Dane

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 10/24/2009 1:55:00 PM

Beautifully poised. All the best.