If I Could Have a Word
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![](For the time when half of the day has gone, The catchword through admission, it is lost, Lest a change of a word that can be, crossed, As 'pass-ed' is the best choice, somewhat, has drawn. One interprets a wasted period, As the other substantiates the point, Pivots on any given word, viewpoint, One equivalent to a myriad. Just a wrong word, to point, could start a war, As the right word will start the peace process, If no word is ventured, then none I guess, Then nothing worthwhile would come to the floor. When you move counter, left or right, there's talk, When both moves centered, then it'll be head-on, So best choice, "the day passed, then, "the day gone", Meaningful day, in matters of the clock.)
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For the time when half the day has gone,
The catchword through admission, it is lost,
Lest a change of a word that can be, crossed,
As 'pass-ed' is the best choice, somewhat, is drawn.
One interprets a wasted period,
As the other substantiates the point,
Pivots on any given word, viewpoint,
One equivalent to a myriad.
Just a wrong word, to point, could start a war,
As the right word will start the peace process,
If no word is ventured, then none I guess,
Then nothing worthwhile would come to the floor.
When you move counter, left or right, there's talk,
When both moves centered, then it'll be head-on,
So best choice, "the day passed, then, "the day gone",
Meaningful day, in matters of the clock.
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2019
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