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If I Could Go Back Collaboration

I wished so hard to be adult;
a fairy heard my wish and then
I whooshed through time and now I'm old...
but long to be a child again...

for Charles' if i could go back contest

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Susan Ashley

August 31, 2018 at 4:38 PM

A yearning truth but for those who look eternally forward.. A brilliant piece, Jack; I know it was for Charlie's collaboration contest, and congratulations on your wonderful win.. but it's a precious and powerful poem on its own as well. Awesome poetry! Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Sara Kendrick

August 29, 2018 at 4:21 PM

Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara

Eve Roper

August 28, 2018 at 3:17 PM

Love your addition to Charlie's poem, Jack...Congratulations on your win!

Charles Messina

August 28, 2018 at 8:38 AM

Jack, I have to agree with Paul, these lines you've added are priceless and a perfect fit. I didn't know where in the poem it was meant to be and it would have ranked higher if you added the rest of the poem. But a wonderful addition none the less and definitely worthy of a placement. Thanks for entering my contest and many Congrats. All the best...Charlie

Paul Callus

August 6, 2018 at 1:24 PM

These are four priceless lines, Jack! Most of us can relate to them. It's a pity that fairies are not always available when truly needed:) Regards // paul