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If I Could Go Back Collaboration

I wished so hard to be adult; a fairy heard my wish and then I whooshed through time and now I'm old... but long to be a child again... for Charles' if i could go back contest

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/31/2018 4:38:00 PM

A yearning truth but for those who look eternally forward.. A brilliant piece, Jack; I know it was for Charlie's collaboration contest, and congratulations on your wonderful win.. but it's a precious and powerful poem on its own as well. Awesome poetry! Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2018 4:21:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 8/28/2018 3:17:00 PM

Love your addition to Charlie's poem, Jack...Congratulations on your win!

Charles Messina

Date: 8/28/2018 8:38:00 AM

Jack, I have to agree with Paul, these lines you've added are priceless and a perfect fit. I didn't know where in the poem it was meant to be and it would have ranked higher if you added the rest of the poem. But a wonderful addition none the less and definitely worthy of a placement. Thanks for entering my contest and many Congrats. All the best...Charlie

Paul Callus

Date: 8/6/2018 1:24:00 PM

These are four priceless lines, Jack! Most of us can relate to them. It's a pity that fairies are not always available when truly needed:) Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2018 7:22:00 PM

oh I gotta see his contest. I really like this ending but I don't know the beginning yet.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2018 11:22:00 AM

I think many of us wish we could go back to the days of our childhood :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx