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If I Could

if i could make you happy just by waving my hand it would be the least of things i hope you understand but i prefer something greater like swiming across the sea or climb the highest mountian just so you could see me like a child says "mommy watch" just pretend that's me i'd dig a hole to china with you watching me and when it comes to taming lions anythings worth a try i'd do it in a second if i knew i'd catch your eye i'd cross the Gobi Desert if you were on the other side walk from here to Tim Buc too if that is where you hide i'd dive into the Baltic sea if you were in a submarine and tap on the hatch my code to let you know where ever you go i won't be far behind so when it comes to making you happy that's nothing to me i could think of a lot of things but i think i'll start by waving my hand

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Date: 1/25/2010 3:32:00 PM
Beautiful poem, enjoyed by Simone
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Date: 1/12/2010 7:16:00 PM
I love your eagerness to make your beloved happy. This is a sweet write John...thanks for posting.
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Date: 1/7/2010 5:51:00 AM
You just make us Happy by being as you are,,A loyal friend to Heart... i have to say ,yet,you are pretty adventorous,and i love it..Charma:)
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Date: 1/6/2010 3:44:00 PM
John iii This is a very wonderful love poem. I like the way you start with a wish, make loads of impressive promises and then end with simplicity... waving your hand. And that, my friend, is a real good start. I'm smiling on this one. Love to you. Dane Ann
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Date: 1/6/2010 9:49:00 AM
If I could---mighty big words John. All the things you would do made me chuckle but then nothing is funny about love and feelings. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 1/5/2010 7:06:00 PM
Loved this delightful poem....this fella is head over heels!!! (made me smile that he would bang on a submarine hatch cover...that is so sweet!!) :) .......Carrie
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Date: 1/5/2010 6:45:00 PM
Very enjoyable reading...Marty
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Date: 1/5/2010 5:34:00 PM
did I say something wrong? on Man of God?
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