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If I Compare You To a Stone

If I say, you are more a stone than a flower, Will you, allow me to live peacefully ever? Yet, dear, it’s clear, stones possess crystal tough texture, Do flowers own a sturdy crystalline structure? Does a flower face all atmospheric pressures? Stones do steadily, with altering atmospheres. A flower, by nature, is often tender, soft, A stone, though hard, has a tender sculptural heart. Though a flower has color it soon fades away, The charming colors of stones, with them, always stay. The precious stones are priceless; you very well know, Is any flower placed in such a revered row? Now I say, you are more a stone than a flower, Will you not leave me to live peacefully ever? 12 August 2021 STONES Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco

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Date: 8/12/2021 6:25:00 PM
this is VERY interesting. Thinking outside the box. Yes!!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/12/2021 10:32:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/12/2021 7:24:00 AM
Wanted to ask you, what is the meaning of Unseeking seeker new contest futile. ..... As we be breathed...... Didn't understand. If you understood, can you tell me.
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Date: 8/12/2021 7:22:00 AM
Profound thoughts. Never thought in this line... You are right.. A winner for me.
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Date: 8/11/2021 11:47:00 PM
Different and extremely well written. Yea a poem, with soul as does Stone.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/12/2021 12:24:00 AM
Thank you very much. It's all your blessings.
Date: 8/11/2021 7:26:00 PM
Beautifully-written, Christuraj:-) Best of luck in the contest!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 11:42:00 PM
Thank you very much.

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