If I Compare You To a Stone

If I say, you are more a stone than a flower,
Will you, allow me to live peacefully ever?

Yet, dear, it’s clear, stones possess crystal tough texture,
Do flowers own a sturdy crystalline structure?

Does a flower face all atmospheric pressures?
Stones do steadily, with altering atmospheres.

A flower, by nature, is often tender, soft,
A stone, though hard, has a tender sculptural heart.

Though a flower has color it soon fades away,
The charming colors of stones, with them, always stay.

The precious stones are priceless; you very well know,
Is any flower placed in such a revered row?

Now I say, you are more a stone than a flower,
Will you not leave me to live peacefully ever?




12 August 2021
STONES Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco
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Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 6:25 PM
this is VERY interesting. Thinking outside the box. Yes!!
Alex Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 10:32 PM
Thank you very much.
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 7:24 AM
Wanted to ask you, what is the meaning of Unseeking seeker new contest futile. ..... As we be breathed...... Didn't understand. If you understood, can you tell me.
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 7:22 AM
Profound thoughts. Never thought in this line... You are right.. A winner for me.
Horsman Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 11:47 PM
Different and extremely well written. Yea a poem, with soul as does Stone.
Alex Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 12:24 AM
Thank you very much. It's all your blessings.
Ibeh Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 7:26 PM
Beautifully-written, Christuraj:-) Best of luck in the contest!
Alex Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 11:42 PM
Thank you very much.
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