If I

IF I

 If I work hard more than I rest,
I'll get it better than the rest.

If I mince no word in the test,
I'll be rated among the best.

If I gladly accept my fate,
I'll live long(er) than diary date,

If I’m mindful, like in prayer(s),
I'll win many race in layer(s).

If I turn every mo. to gold,
I will be happy, great and bold.

If I can live that wholly life,
I’ll be a trait fits for all wife. 

A.O 8/9/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Oyerinde  Avatar
December 20, 2024 at 10:59 AM
The rhyming endings are perfect ?? If I’m mindful in prayer I’ll win many races in layers
Adewuyi Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 10:23 AM
Great!
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 8:41 AM
If I can live that wholly life, I’ll be a trait fits for all wife. Here you rock.Love Abdul>>>rajat
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