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IF I If I work hard more than I rest, I'll get it better than the rest. If I mince no word in the test, I'll be rated among the best. If I gladly accept my fate, I'll live long(er) than diary date, If I’m mindful, like in prayer(s), I'll win many race in layer(s). If I turn every mo. to gold, I will be happy, great and bold. If I can live that wholly life, I’ll be a trait fits for all wife. A.O 8/9/2014

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Date: 12/20/2024 10:59:00 AM
The rhyming endings are perfect ?? If I’m mindful in prayer I’ll win many races in layers
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Date: 11/30/2015 10:23:00 AM
Great!
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Date: 1/15/2015 8:41:00 AM
If I can live that wholly life, I’ll be a trait fits for all wife. Here you rock.Love Abdul>>>rajat
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