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If At First

A would-be poet wrote a Sonnet, With few brains under her bonnet, She tried and miserably failed. She picked up her pen, And tried once again this time her persistence prevailed.

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Date: 6/26/2021 12:23:00 PM
This accurately describes a number of Soupers! Enjoyed!
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Date: 6/25/2021 6:55:00 PM
Well, she believed if at first you don't succeed, try, try again. I agree with her. I'm a believer. I think if you try to do something long enough and hard enough, you will eventually succeed.
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/26/2021 9:06:00 PM
Thank you,

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