If and When

~She Loved Him At First Sight~ 

If she falls in love, 
she will open her window and stare at the clouds movements, 
sending with them her spirit and soul to fly away, meet 
with the highly demonstrative entourage of life, 
to smile again. 

If she falls in love, 
she will transform her ego in a delightful mood of romance, 
hastily search for another positive thought, to strengthen 
her emotions to become undisturbed, generous, rightful, 
and faithful, 
to love again. 

When she falls in love, 
her thoughts will want her strength to protect her 
independence, by joining freedom of her mind, to tutor her 
Heart to balance her brain and body, calm down, 
and love again. 

If she falls in love, 
she will embrace her happiness to be free, as a blessing was passing 
through her deep feelings, to join her strong signal of commitments, 
to love him forever, 
and smile again. 

If she falls in love, 
she will sense the sense of floating as in the ocean, 
feel the unpredictable delightful nature of herself, 
become super sensitive and challenging, when it comes to 
loving each of her thoughts, beg them, to react positively, 
to smile again. 

When she falls in love, 
one of her thoughts became the most delightful companion 
while walking with her through a path, that blossomed with 
a light drizzling rain passing by, allowing them to smile again, 
until she meets him tomorrow. 

She fell in love and both, smiled again. 


Written By Therese Bacha 
      6/6/2013                      Contest For Linda.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/13/2013 10:47:00 AM
very good. makes me want to fall in love!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/13/2013 11:11:00 AM
Hi Stephanie, my grandchild has your name, thank so much for passing by, i will visit you to. Fall in love, as being in love is so beautiful. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 4/12/2013 5:32:00 PM
Terry; This is very touching and heartfelt. I am glad that you could smile again. may many blessings come your way........ Lucilla
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/12/2013 7:50:00 PM
Hi Lucy, thank you so much, i am glad you liked it. Love Terry xoxoxo
Date: 4/12/2013 4:55:00 PM
Ahh.........this is gorgeous, and so filled with hope and love returned.......such an uplifting poem for anyone who has suffered loss of love.
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/12/2013 7:50:00 PM
Thank you Carrie, i so happy you passed by. Love Terry
Date: 4/12/2013 3:57:00 PM
Good that she fell in love again...Great expressive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/12/2013 7:51:00 PM
Hello Sara, thank you so much i am happy you liked it. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 4/12/2013 11:30:00 AM
There is nothing wrong with loving yourself ...... but it's better to share love with others. - You have a big warm heart ..... - A very good poem my friend Terry. - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - (I share my poem "Just A Kiss" with you) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/12/2013 11:33:00 AM
Sorry Anne, it is a wrong comment i wrote down. Thank you for passing by, you are so faithful i always write it because it is true. LOve Terry xoxo
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/12/2013 11:31:00 AM
I would love to change what you want to, but i did not understand if i put YOU instead of I..please answer me thank you Terry
Date: 4/12/2013 11:12:00 AM
#1, you. The way it should be. Wonderfully done!
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Date: 4/12/2013 11:32:00 AM
I would love to change what you want to, but i did not understand if i put YOU instead of I..please answer me thank you Terry
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