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If (A Corny Valentine - Tanka)

you are Salome
I am your love-enslaved
need you ask    my dear?
nay!    ask thee not for my head
I give you my heart instead

i do not know?

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Monica Nealy

February 22, 2010 at 1:04 PM

lol very cute

Corinne Curcio

February 21, 2010 at 4:23 AM

Chuckle. Delightful!

Susan Palli

February 14, 2010 at 8:32 AM

cute

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 10, 2010 at 3:28 AM

Daver, I enjoyed your "corny valentine- tanka. And that is no bologna. Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

February 9, 2010 at 1:30 PM

This is a great fun poem, daver. I bet she takes it literally from your chest!! Luv, Andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

February 7, 2010 at 8:31 PM

I love it Daver! You are such a romantic soul! enjoyed this one much and thanks for your logical comment on my poem. Logic and common sense is a rare find in this day and age. God bless you my friend. -Robert

February 7, 2010 at 1:01 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. Hope you don't have to give your head! Thanks for sharing this day brightener and for your kind comment. Have a good day! Karen