If

IF
If I say sorry for a hundred times,
Will you forgive me or you just cry and run,
like I don’t have money will you still be mine?
or are you the type of girl who always wanna have fun
If I say things to you that sounds no true,
Will you believe it so simply because your my boo,
like I don’t have a sleep at night and yet I dream about you,
I’m sure you will give me that look and say mhm!
If I do you wrong, and go down on my knees,
Say that am sorry with a thousand please,
Tell me if you forgive me, or see me as kind of crazy,
and tell your friends you're a reason why I breathe!
If you ask me to take you home,
I will take you to a place where am originally from,
wake up in the morning smell a Cow den,
“Wamishaga hmola” that’s a salam,
tell me if you wish to be at that place even for one time.
were peanut, milk, and michembe are food for grown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lil Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 6:12 PM
A bit of fun and a bit of thought , reflection of how somebody must accept you in and out. Great Write Welcome to poetry soup here are all the great minds of the days and through the nights :)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 11:48 PM
Where there's love there always so much hope to be forgiven but this should not go to abuse! :D Congrats!
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July 16, 2016 at 12:24 AM
simon nene, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Nene Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Thank Linda i actually not exactly belong to poem field i am a rapper but sometime i like to write poem. i would love to meet the guy who you think can guide me.
Shanmugam Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 2:36 AM
nice poem Simon;)
Nene Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 5:31 PM
Thanks Madhupriya
A  Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 1:05 AM
Simon, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
Nene Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 5:33 PM
Thanks a lot Skat appreciate that i will keep up the good work
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