If

if i died today... the world would be a better place if i could leave without a trace... if i died today... would you mourn me tomorrow? would you miss me next week? would you remember me in a year? if i died today... would you hold me one last time? would you give me one last kiss? would you whisper i was loved? if i died today... would you shed a single tear? would you forgive me all my sins? would you live and love again? if i died today... if i take the pain i've dealt before close the gates of heavens door...

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Matthew Hamilton

Date: 12/4/2011 11:36:00 AM

This is deep and very thought provoking. I honestly hope that when I die I can somehow look back to Earth and see what happens. To be able to see if I really made any sort of difference or impact on anyone. What I do know is you have made an impact on me. I would mourn you, I would always remember you, and I would hope that you have finally found a peace and happiness that we can not achieve here in this world.