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Let not olden days aspire All about the you and me In wild, wild winter of desire Longing and longing to be In each other’s warmth Love is in the air, they say Oh, with it the minded minds Vibrantly wish to live and sway Embracing between the lines Speechless faith does harm Now that we both are in the Arms of the great unbeknownst Never been such our history Crazy us that we surely own Yonder mountain of distrust Let not this fungus of love Overwinter in dead leaves of the Verdant tree of such belove Entrapping souls to live in the Same old alleys of our lust Love is in the air, they say Ah, with thoughts and dreams If ego did not part our ways Love, would it be so deem Irresistible like us of yesterday

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/4/2012 12:47:00 PM

Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Ernesto. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/1/2011 1:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Ernesto. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/7/2011 5:09:00 AM

What more could I ask for today? It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. I am reading your poetry in which you share a little of yourself maybe without even realizing it you have written from your soul. Thank you for sharing your magnificent poetry with us Ernesto. Love, Carol

Ernesto P. Santiago
Date: 7/7/2011 5:20:00 AM

hello there, nice to see you dear Carol as always visiting/reading/commenting my pieces, and that i really loved. i think i did share a bit of me here, hehe, and sadness is my forte, hahaha! this is my first write after years of idleness. social networks took a lot of my time away from mainstream poetry, but i am into this haiku thing now. indeed i just came back from you country last june. i was invited as guest featured poet by hsa, smile!!! again, thank you!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/6/2011 2:24:00 PM

Lovely passionate expressions on the feelings of love, Ernesto

Ernesto P. Santiago
Date: 7/7/2011 5:09:00 AM

thanks Dr. Ram for your visit and comment, much appreciated by me. gbu!