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"if"

If clouds had steps, we would climb up high... To reach the heaven's ,and all those gone by... If anger and pain could be caught in the air... We could wave it away with just love and care...

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Audonus Taylor

Date: 11/13/2010 4:00:00 AM

Been meaning to get back to your works, and I am not disappointed at ALL. Another great piece from you... I think you have some John Lennon in your blood! I got a strong Beatles vibe by your verse here. Hopefully that doesnt make your head too big lol, but you made music with this man,GREAT WORK!!!

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/13/2010 1:27:00 AM

To wave them away would be pure bliss Mr. F! Hope your weekend will be blessed one ;) love Wilma

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/12/2010 11:00:00 AM

Very inspiring, love that cloud taking us upward:)

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/11/2010 10:10:00 AM

cute. jhl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/11/2010 10:04:00 AM

Let's climb to the heavens, Michael, and try to wave away any anger and pain that we find "caught in the air" as we rise. Very thought-provoking and uplifting poem! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/11/2010 9:18:00 AM

If and but are the two exprfessions we always try to avoid, Michael

Sarah Hales

Date: 11/11/2010 8:37:00 AM

awww this is so lovelly Michael i missed your reads too thank you for the nice comments ..s mail waiting for you sarah x

Francine Roberts

Date: 11/11/2010 8:32:00 AM

beautiful sentiments Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/11/2010 8:12:00 AM

Amazing 'if' it were possible ..maybe in the mind .. luvv.. one day we all will meet again.. back at u luv from across the water and bridge to your handsome face luv... J.G. W.K. GO GIANTS ..forever...always with luv..