"if"

If clouds had steps, we would climb up high...
To reach the heaven's ,and all those gone by...

If anger and pain could be caught in the air...
We could wave it away with just love and care...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
November 13, 2010 at 4:00 AM
Been meaning to get back to your works, and I am not disappointed at ALL. Another great piece from you... I think you have some John Lennon in your blood! I got a strong Beatles vibe by your verse here. Hopefully that doesnt make your head too big lol, but you made music with this man,GREAT WORK!!!
Neels Avatar
November 13, 2010 at 1:27 AM
To wave them away would be pure bliss Mr. F! Hope your weekend will be blessed one ;) love Wilma
Harper Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 11:00 AM
Very inspiring, love that cloud taking us upward:)
Loving Iii Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 10:10 AM
cute. jhl
Devonshire Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 10:04 AM
Let's climb to the heavens, Michael, and try to wave away any anger and pain that we find "caught in the air" as we rise. Very thought-provoking and uplifting poem! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 9:18 AM
If and but are the two exprfessions we always try to avoid, Michael
Hales Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 8:37 AM
awww this is so lovelly Michael i missed your reads too thank you for the nice comments ..s mail waiting for you sarah x
Roberts Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 8:32 AM
beautiful sentiments Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 8:12 AM
Amazing 'if' it were possible ..maybe in the mind .. luvv.. one day we all will meet again.. back at u luv from across the water and bridge to your handsome face luv... J.G. W.K. GO GIANTS ..forever...always with luv..
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