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Idle Pond

A pond kept unclean
                             is detrimental to all
                                           that accretes to it.


Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

05-24-2012

Copyright © Pace Ink-U-Script | Year Posted 2012

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Mahtab Bangalee

December 4, 2019 at 4:01 AM

idle pond detrimental to all!

Deborah Shiells

May 9, 2014 at 9:47 PM

Hi Pace, This was interesting!! Loved it said so much in quick time. Thanks for sharing this write with us . Peace, Deborah

March 9, 2013 at 10:04 PM

Great work

Chase Rhinehart

March 7, 2013 at 12:52 PM

Greatly enjoyed, nice job.

December 28, 2012 at 6:21 AM

still waters run deep, many ways to read in to this little wonder,, hope you've had a good christmas, have a brilliant new year, like to see more poetry from you though

August 12, 2012 at 11:47 PM

Yes...cleanliness is next to Godliness...great Haiku Ink...DEEP!

Pace Ink-U-Script

August 18, 2012 at 8:17 PM

Yes maam you are correct!!! Smiles thank you Doreen!!

Michelle Mac Donald

August 3, 2012 at 9:43 AM

Good day Pace! An "IDLE POND", is one that can also be a busy one.:) A short but encompassing write! Enjoying this Haiku! Best wishes to you....Mikki :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

August 18, 2012 at 8:16 PM

Thank you Michelle always!! :)

Kathryn Collins

June 18, 2012 at 12:21 PM

I love these three liners, INK-U-SCRIPT. Very wise and unique. AND you force me to my dictionary. love, Kathy

Pace Ink-U-Script

August 18, 2012 at 8:13 PM

Thank you dearly Kathryn!!

June 16, 2012 at 10:55 PM

...and it has the stagnant stench of death...hahah..super duper haiku...enjoying this read this evening!

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 17, 2012 at 9:59 PM

Thank you dearly for sharing with me!!!

Keith Bickerstaffe

June 15, 2012 at 11:57 AM

Well said, my friend! Perfect 575 meter, grammatically correct and a marvelous comma-less flow!! Best wishes, Keith

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 17, 2012 at 9:59 PM

Thank you!!! Always welcome to visit anytime!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

June 8, 2012 at 10:50 PM

Very true! Thanks for sharing and for your kind comments on my poem. Caroline. :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 11, 2012 at 11:02 AM

Thank you for sharing with me!

Poet Destroyer A

June 5, 2012 at 9:43 PM

Hi, "Ink-U-Script" how are you? Stopping by to say hi.. I wanted to send you poets hugs, for a small tiny comment you made on your brothers last blog. Life"" yup, we get what we pay for, i bet many of us are not expecting any change back... xox..pd

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 6, 2012 at 9:03 AM

I sent you soup mail..but thank you for the hugs and sharing your comments with me pd!!

June 4, 2012 at 3:47 PM

So much gets said sometimes with so few words. A profound little write. I think sometimes my name should have been Billy Idle. :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 4, 2012 at 8:56 PM

Thank you Robert always!!!

June 4, 2012 at 7:43 AM

so true.

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 4, 2012 at 8:30 AM

Thank you for sharing with me today Keisha!! hugs

June 2, 2012 at 10:46 AM

Nicely done!!!

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 2, 2012 at 12:41 PM

Thanks Sean..!!

June 1, 2012 at 12:49 PM

That is a good one..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I hope that your day has been good..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 2, 2012 at 12:40 PM

Thank you kindly Sara..always!!

June 1, 2012 at 3:22 AM

sounds about right, a better sight, the tadpole swims away ... love it mate...

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 1, 2012 at 5:02 AM

Yes sir indeed!! Thanks Don...always!

May 31, 2012 at 1:53 PM

Hey Pace, I enjoyed this ;)

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 31, 2012 at 2:36 PM

Thank you Wilma!! hugs

May 31, 2012 at 10:40 AM

It's true and practical. Loved always and thanks for all the comments on my today's write. bl

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 31, 2012 at 10:44 AM

Thank you so much always!! I love the fact that you pick my brain with your choice of words in your writings!!

May 31, 2012 at 10:40 AM

The Haiku remains a mystery to me... However, you seem to have mastered it... Wonderful... Terry (& thanks for your kind words)

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 31, 2012 at 10:43 AM

Wow, I'm speechless..a wonderful surprise to see you stop by.!! honored by your comment!!

May 31, 2012 at 9:40 AM

Bad news for the local wildlife at best. Neat and poignant write you have here. Huggs TLee

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 31, 2012 at 10:42 AM

lol..Thank you dearly Terry always!!

May 29, 2012 at 7:41 PM

wow such depth in this Haiku.

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 29, 2012 at 10:15 PM

Thank you so much!!

Patrick Cornwall

May 27, 2012 at 8:32 PM

Haiku at its best...enjoyed bro...P

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 28, 2012 at 5:51 AM

Thank you Patrick!!!

May 27, 2012 at 11:20 AM

mosquitoes,frogs,bacteria,be careful of the IDLE POND,love it

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 27, 2012 at 3:19 PM

Lol..yes indeed..Thanks for stopping by Richard!!

Toquyen Harrell

May 26, 2012 at 7:23 AM

"Good one! Love, Toquyen"

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 26, 2012 at 7:30 AM

Thank you dearly Toquyen!!!

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