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Idle No More

Oil train sits in Lac Megantic Town folk sleep not so frantic Patrons socialize while they slept Unannounced the train it crept No such thing a train in idle This one proved homicidal Train engine fire silent alarm Town unaware no fear of harm First responders do arrive Count all engines numbered five Connected cars are seventy two Full of crude what would you do Disconnect these things on fire Bigger problem no desire Cut the risk to light the crude This decision would be shrewd Seventy two cars, assumed on brake Town folk safe that slept on lake Take in account train on slope Some brakes off more danger the scope Idle train crept no more Picking up speed problem galore This idle train left to chance Never checked not even a glance Explosion awakes town folk in slumber Instantly town folk less fifty in number People running saving some lives Survivors to hear fifty bell chimes Responsibility left to whom This decision in the courtroom On a slope a running car park Driver responsible ticket don't bark MMA you will be slandered Go to hell with your train standard You brought a man carrying sickle In Quebec you control your vehicle If you don't the charge is life Stand in camera and take it in strife Angry people you will see Many more including me. Left to idle a runaway Change the law starting today Always manned train must be Someone in place we must see Looking back cutting the cost Was it worth all lives lost? One more man not a big chore Let these trains Idle no more

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Date: 7/30/2016 8:44:00 PM
Roland, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest --- 101 in a row. :) Stop by my blog "They Hang Horses, Don't They?" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Ronald Kent
Date: 7/30/2016 9:38:00 PM
Thank you very much for the karma, and wish you the same in abundance. Looking forward to checking out your blog.
Date: 7/30/2016 2:52:00 PM
Love the emotion in this piece, great way to immortalize this tragedy.
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Ronald Kent
Date: 7/30/2016 4:18:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by and giving it a read.
Date: 7/25/2016 7:36:00 PM
Great rhythm and rhyme, I remember reading of this tragedy some years ago, I could feel the exasperation and anger in your poem.
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Date: 7/25/2016 7:58:00 PM
I wrote this so soon after that the fifty bell chimes turned into 47. Thanks for your many comments. I do appreciate it.
Date: 8/19/2013 1:58:00 PM
Congrats on your great win..Enjoyed reading this winning work today..Sara
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Date: 8/16/2013 7:26:00 AM
congrats on your win xx
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Date: 8/15/2013 4:49:00 AM
congrats on a fine win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 8/15/2013 12:51:00 AM
congrats on your great win. (:c Jenish
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Date: 8/14/2013 5:38:00 PM
Hi Ronald, , ~CONGRATULATIONS~ . thank you for the awesome entry. When you have time enjoy the winners on my XOOL blog * Called "Just For You" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15796&PoetID=18720 Take care --- xox Linda
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Date: 8/4/2013 5:43:00 PM
Ronald,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/4/2013 12:26:00 PM
Hello new member: Ronald ! - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/4/2013 10:59:00 AM
Good Afternoon Ronald, a nice hold and grip... deep thoughts -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@.... ..
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