Idle musings

If we be space within which flows time,
drumming a beat sounding love’s chime,
where then is the fun, if no surprises stun
and there are no imperfections to be undone?
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Kavanagh  Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 8:55 AM
You have hit the nail on the head Seeker, I’m probably taking the theme out of context, the surprise is not always fun, nevertheless the imperfection must attempt to be undone, makes me wonder can perfection ever exist or is that the point, nice pondering cheers David
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 10:42 AM
I do love singularities!
Seeker Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 10:26 AM
Simply stated, in singularity we are complete but we learn nothing since there is no adversity to be overcome. Descent into duality causes us to forget our origin. Then we work at purifying heart, erasing ego, that we may see who we were, are and will be ~ living light eternal.
Pandit Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 6:20 AM
Powerful reflections from a gifted pen, US. You always present themes that make me pause and think.
Seeker Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 7:34 AM
Thank you, Vijay, hope you are doing well
One Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 4:39 AM
I would say deep musings, not idle.... so many imperfections my friend..
Seeker Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 7:33 AM
:)
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