Idiot

You’re an idiot – 
Can’t you see
That what you write isn’t poetry? 
Why aren’t you embarrassed?
How can you be pleased?
Your poetry’s the snot  
Blown out of a sneeze
An ooey gooey booger
You want me to read

Well NEWS FLASH
YOU SUCK
Your poems are so bad
I can’t read past the first line
Without going MAD

Get them out of here
Your poems aren’t a gift -
In fact I will tell you
The truth and it’s this:
Your poems are just steaming
Piles of S H I T …

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Pandita Sietesantos

June 30, 2014 at 3:55 PM

Hehehehe, Black Eyed Susan, you're the best! You scored highly in all places with this gem! Thanks for putting it all out there in the right terms! Love it!

Andrea Dietrich

April 19, 2014 at 10:04 PM

susan, I see tim really liked this one, and I DO TOO. Big congrats to you. HOpe to hear from you soon. My hotmail was kind of dry today!!!

Michael Dom

April 18, 2014 at 8:11 PM

Ouch. Nasty! Quite a slam dunk there, giving someone a big Black Eyed Susan. Congratulations.

Tim Smith

April 18, 2014 at 6:31 PM

Ha....I love your jib Susan...You'd fit in with my friends perfectly..We have something we call "Slander Sunday" where we can rant, rave, cut up and slam each other with no repercussions on Sundays.....perfect Tim....congrats on your win

Poet Destroyer A

April 18, 2014 at 4:03 PM

Haha back here again, Susan, lol... you got to tell me who's this slamming... congratulations... ... By the way I have something to say to all who supported my ANY POEM # 19 contest. Shame on me, Shame on me! Please forgive me, for not taking the time, to CONGRATULATE and adore all the winning poems for a second or third time. I AM VERY LATE:(-- I was a little mad at the world. However, this is my winning list, I will give everyone the same love and support. I'm dropping by with a Copy Paste note from the bottom of my heart. I am sorry, it's not like me, to walk away, as if nothing. Truly, I appreciate every winning poem, and HM. LOVE LINDA

Aiyah Torres

April 17, 2014 at 8:18 AM

whew!! ,,this is heavy... this is great!!! I wish I have a power to express myself this way on earth!!! ..you're the only one, Sue!!! ..Congratulations!!! :O)