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Identity Theft

And if I felt it freeze my soul I know I've finally lost control And if it spoke to me in vain I know I let it steal my Name And if I take before I give I know it claimed my right to live And if I sought to make it real I know the hurt could never heal A dream of hate is still a dream No matter how real it may seem Because I try my best to love I hope to join my Self above Because I'm desperate for a Friend I hope someday to make amends Because I cry from loneliness I hope I can escape from this Because I give before I take I hope He'll gently let me wake A dream of love is still a dream No matter how real it may seem

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John Freeman

Date: 7/18/2009 3:04:00 PM

Very good rhyme and flow of thought here Yoni, God bless, Godly love Moses!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/3/2009 2:50:00 AM

this is deep -who are we?what are our dreams?who are a re friends,what are we seeking---great write my friend Yoni-charma

Brian Anderson

Date: 4/26/2009 8:24:00 AM

another great write, yoni. you continue to amaze me

Danielle White

Date: 4/19/2009 3:00:00 AM

Lovely, and deeper than what appears on the surface. Have you seen the movie "Jacob's Ladder"? It's a cult classic. I think you might enjoy it. *****Danielle******

Date: 4/4/2009 7:50:00 PM

Keep on sharing your love and the friends will come. God is always there for us even through the lonely times. This is a thought provoking piece. Nice job! Thank you for your kind thoughts on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/2/2009 8:06:00 PM

Dear Yoni, YOUR Talent manifest's itself in this Awesome POETRY YOU have Mastered the form "Couplet" Is a Dream still a Dream after it becomes True? ALWAYS YOURS...HG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/2/2009 6:59:00 PM

Yoni, this is another great poem! I do believe you will awake from your dream one day and find your true love at your side. You have so much to offer - a beautiful heart and soul!

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/2/2009 2:14:00 PM

very passionate and moving. John H Loving III

Michael Jordan

Date: 4/1/2009 9:59:00 PM

Yoni that was very beautiful - an outstanding couplet with wonderful rhyme and excellent flow that just made the message pour off the paper into my heart - God Bless you, MJ

Arany P.

Date: 4/1/2009 9:45:00 AM

this one is really touching! the last two lines really hit it hard! lovely couplet! ~ aRANY