Identify

Oldage is a state of mind
Old as the civiliazation of humanity
Old as the first lies told by lucifer
Old as sarliver
 
That is how old Identity is
 
I have lost my sense of belong
The sense of believing in words
The sense of having faith in love
The sense of knowing what is wrong, what is good and what is acceptable
Untill i became senseless for not having a sense to my path in life
 
I am a victim
A victim who once never had a choice
A victim who was once brutally robbed
A victim of identity thief
 
This is not just how I feel but this is how victims of abuse feel
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 1, 2013 at 7:04 PM
Godfrey, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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October 1, 2013 at 2:45 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Godfrey ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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October 1, 2013 at 2:26 AM
Thanks Linda, i am still trying to find my way around the site. I will surely keep you posted. Thanks
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October 1, 2013 at 1:33 AM
nice poem of identity Godfrey ,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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