Ideate

imagine the world, if we all did our part if we lived everyday straight from the heart what if our children were taught, not to take but to give imagine the world, in which we could live imagine true love, if there were such a thing think of the peace and the joy it would bring could we all hold hands and learn how to forgive imagine true love, if we learned how to live imagine your life, if there were more that would try what if we could just see the truth and not hear the lie could we move forward and learn how to grow imagine your life, if we were all in the know imagine the world, if all hope was gone how would we live, how could we move on would we live everyday with just hate in our hearts imagine the world, if we never did our part

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 1/15/2021 9:10:00 AM

Love this Mark, if only we all did our part the world would be a big bright shining heart. Mark your poem reads from top down or bottom up, either way it’s superb... Belle

Mark Koplin
Date: 1/17/2021 7:53:00 AM

Thank you very much Belle, I appreciate your kind comment!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/15/2021 8:36:00 AM

the first few stanzas makes me think of louis Armstrong what a wonderful world it would be the final stanza is thought provoking and we must work together to achieve an ideal world :-) hugs jan xx

Mark Koplin
Date: 1/17/2021 7:51:00 AM

One day at a time, Thank you Jan!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/15/2021 7:21:00 AM

What a great world it would be Mark, be like heaven on earth. Have a great weekend Tom

Mark Koplin
Date: 1/17/2021 7:49:00 AM

Yes it would, Thanks Tom, enjoy the day my friend!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/15/2021 5:22:00 AM

This is a true pearl of wisdom, a rich color among the faded hues, a vibrant touch of your heart's truth. God bless you my friend

Mark Koplin
Date: 1/17/2021 7:49:00 AM

Thanks Regina!!

Jenna Logan

Date: 1/15/2021 5:10:00 AM

The best thing about an imagination is that we can put on those rose colored glasses and see the world, love, and life as they should be. It's worth the effort to make our imaginings reality. An excellent outlook, Mark.

Mark Koplin
Date: 1/17/2021 7:48:00 AM

Thank you so very much Jenna, I concur.