Qui Bee Poet I do not know?

I'D Fallen Deep

Let me be consumed by darkness:

Take me in your shadows,
I can no longer be within the light!

Let me sleep
For I am tired.
Let me fall,
For I am frail.

I can stand no longer
As your opposition,
I merely surrender
To your force.

Take me! -
Let me rest
Upon your hold -

For I'd find peace
In this comfortable madness,
I'd fallen deep.

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Faleshia Murphy April 26, 2010 at 12:15 PM very good write wish you the best in your life and welcome to poetry soup faleshia

Carol Sunshine Brown April 26, 2010 at 6:31 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Qui. If you would like to have more of your poetry read try to limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Jessica Arteaga April 25, 2010 at 10:47 PM sometimes i too just want to cascade in the shade and fade, but sometimes the need of a solitary fill, will remind us that we still have will and we could keep going and make our day stand more than what is given with a doting pill.

Amy Green April 25, 2010 at 10:20 PM Love it.