Icy Invitation

Winter shows her tongue
With laps of frozen laughter
Teasing all who watch.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 16, 2015 at 1:11 AM
Hi Ray, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page :). **SKAT**
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March 1, 2010 at 5:41 AM
ohhhhh good one! most excellent! Light & Love
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February 26, 2010 at 7:33 PM
Very nice Haiku...enjoyed....good luck in the contest...Marty
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February 26, 2010 at 5:48 PM
Great ideas here in this Haiku that should be in the winner's circle if an entry. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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February 26, 2010 at 8:01 AM
Good luck if this is your entry for Raul's new contest.. luv those icy invitation words... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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February 26, 2010 at 7:59 AM
Touche' Ray .. nice way to say .. more snow on the way .. only thing to do is play.. or pray .. it stops sometime today .. like your lines say ... icy invitation OK.. thankxxx ..hey..was a great response to my blog Ray.. u are OK... luv your Haiku I say.. u definitely made my day.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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