Icy Caress

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I believe that love can be rekindled. Too many people just take each other for granted and give up too soon. They believe the grass is greener on the other side. Well, I believe you fight and keep your love and marriage going. Nothing is too much if you love someone.

Icy caress against her skin
love is frozen with your stare 
where has love gone, is it lost?
her heart is breaking don't you care?

avalanche in her heart 
cold, stiff, frozen
happiness ushered out the door 
it is tearing her apart.

do something fast, 
tease her with desire
make her feel alive, 
treat her like a mistress with cunning craft.

snow storm in her mind 
biting, chilly, ice 
losing you, leaving you behind.

take her to bed, legs entwined,
make love, like crazy-youths 
fill her with your rhythmic thrust 
with a pleasing grind, your love rewind.

your ego drop, find your game 
show her love, 
actions not words
show you care, her turbulence tame

a note, a seductive little gesture
a romantic dinner, a sex escape
roses, a ring, a dress
shower her with love and pleasure

avalanche in her heart 
cold 
Stiff
frozen
tearing her apart

raging, dancing flames, robust 
filling, bursting, delirious
evoking, stirring, old desire 
dating, taming, quenching lust

sun in her heart 
warm
radiant 
bright
make a brand new start

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Susan Ashley

Date: 9/5/2017 8:37:00 PM

Klio, this is fantastic. Captivating from start to finish and beautifully, poetically expressed. Loved the immediacy, rhythm and format of your poem, it made me feel like I was in your head with your thoughts (does that even make sense.., but I know what I mean if you don't lol!). Amazing!

Klio Tsitsikroni
Date: 9/13/2017 3:06:00 AM

Hi Susan thank you. Some of my lady friends are having a tough time of it. No romance in their life no more. So... maybe they can rekindle it. Who knows?

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 9/5/2017 12:09:00 PM

Congratulation and flowers .Experience of life shared and amazing verses and feeling prove not only great talent to express the wonder of this world but also the secret hope in another better one, even if pure imagery and dream. Karma as sum of our deeds could have improved through shared dreams and mysterious love winning humanity. I imagine yet sun in her heart, and light in our mind to re-cover a new Greenwich, the line of love as present in our palm, too: touching our destiny.Best regards.

Klio Tsitsikroni
Date: 9/13/2017 3:07:00 AM

Thank you, Ovidiu