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Inhospitable stares; Invisible slickness; Incandescent beauty In glacial scenes so fair! Immense chill on a breeze! Imbibing an *Icee - Instant, intense brain-freeze! Feb. 24, 2017 for Kim Merryman's I Pleiades Poetry Contest * An Icee (or slurpee) is a frozen carbonated drink. If consumed too quickly it sometimes feels like you get a short horrible headache we call brain freeze!

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Mark Martin

Date: 3/4/2017 2:16:00 PM

N-ice poetry. I-cee the common theme here. Congratulations on your win Andrea! :-)

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/3/2017 2:16:00 PM

A creative topic, and clever how you worked your "food" theme into this frosty Pleiades! Congrats! Blessings, Kim

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/2/2017 3:53:00 AM

Great ... Congratulations on your win ...

Jan Allison

Date: 3/1/2017 5:26:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/1/2017 4:23:00 PM

Back with congratulations, Andrea. Regards // paul

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/1/2017 3:38:00 PM

Fun one, Andrea :) Congrats on your win :)

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 3/1/2017 9:58:00 AM

I experienced the freeze recently with my smoothie, what a great and unique topic to write on!Congrats Andrea!

Joseph May

Date: 3/1/2017 7:29:00 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/1/2017 3:33:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great win in Pleiades I contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 3/1/2017 2:43:00 AM

Congrats, Andrea! I loved all that I have read so far and am amazed at the volume of talent at poetry soup.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/28/2017 10:27:00 PM

Back for congrats!

Deborah Burch

Date: 2/28/2017 10:09:00 PM

Congratulations Andy!! Big Hugggs deb :)

Eve Roper

Date: 2/28/2017 9:46:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win :) Hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 2/27/2017 12:40:00 PM

I love Icee.... and yes brain--freeze not really a brain freeze , but “chest freeze.” and just as painful. Very good write good luck in the contest... Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 2/26/2017 12:52:00 PM

I like this creative take on the 'ice' theme, Andrea. Is the 'icee' what we over here call 'slush'? If that is the case, then I quite like it...I prefer it to ice-cream. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/26/2017 12:08:00 PM

- A great pleiades poem, Andrea - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels

Date: 2/26/2017 9:55:00 AM

Nice use of "I" throughout... "Imbibing an Icee" is such a great line. Well done!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/25/2017 8:01:00 PM

So many visuals, Andrea! Glacial ice is indeed beautiful! Well done!