Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Icy

Icy northwesterly winds whip
Like a buggy whip cracks,
Hurrying the horses along
Dragging winter on its back.

Green leaves battered to the brown earth
Instant early death befalls.
Tender young fruit most likely gone
Spring unsettled appalls.  

Unfinished

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Timothy Hicks April 14, 2016 at 2:13 AM Engrossing images with the horse and buggy lines, Sara. Curious where this continues when you finish it. Was that your own picture? We once had a storm, here in Idaho, that made a mailbox (post and all) tilt at 45 degrees! It made for an amusing picture.

Jerry T Curtis April 11, 2016 at 4:01 PM I agree with Andrea---what a great line and the image....... Sara Kendrick April 11, 2016 at 4:10 PM I can just see that buggy whip fast, speeding through the air with the sound of a strong winter breeze..Glad that you could see the image as well..Thanks for stopping by.Sara

Andrea Dietrich April 11, 2016 at 3:29 PM ooh, what a cool image. the wind as a buggy dragging winter on its back!! Sara Kendrick April 11, 2016 at 4:09 PM Glad that you found merit in my line..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Bl Devnath April 10, 2016 at 10:09 AM Beautiful poem on natural changes my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

Samantha Withee April 9, 2016 at 4:10 PM Great form Very nicely done, I'm new to this site. Must say I don't think I can live up too all the amazing writers like yourself.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2016 at 12:17 PM - Sounds terrible, Sara - Here we have enjoyed a beautiful spring day with lots of birdsong - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sara Kendrick April 9, 2016 at 12:34 PM Anne Lise, The birds are still singing but it is suppose to be really cool tonight probably the last cold snap of the spring with smooth sailing now..Sara

Beautiful Scars April 9, 2016 at 12:02 PM Sara, what? That's crazy. "Like a buggy whip cracks..." love that line..well written girly :)-luloo Sara Kendrick April 9, 2016 at 12:28 PM Yes, it is very windy and cold here today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara