icing the rainbow

ice crystals form here softening the rainbow’s ends colors dance today

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2025 4:59:00 PM

This is sure cute, Robert. And thanks for my contest eim

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/4/2025 11:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Haiku write. Rainbows sure dance with pretty colors. Have a fun day writing away..............

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/4/2025 12:12:00 AM

I enjoy your picturesque haiku of a beautiful rainbow with a touch of science to boot It's very clever.

David Crandall

Date: 3/3/2025 5:13:00 PM

nice image, Robert!

Ink Empress

Date: 3/3/2025 12:43:00 PM

What a pretty haiku dear robert, Its so good to see you write about other things in the world, things like rainbows that symbolize for me hope amidst all! I love how picturesque it is and also how pretty it is! I can see through your wordsX rainbow! And i must say also that i love the title! Its unique and beautiful! I think haiku is your thing! You should write more! This is definitely a top winner! Pleasure reading you today and sending you light today and always