Iced Feelings Warmly Kissed Away Love

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unrhymed couplets 8 in sixteen lines to say sweet thought 

Light of your promise on a scent of a forgetmenot 
Colouring rainbows sparkle diamond end treasure of the century 

As gold paints over darkness lifting a heart buried 
from out of the desert fire burning light of destiny strikes 

A heart flies blessed igniting sparks the fireworks 
within flames your candlelight dances glorious

The most loving feelings to ever touch begin to explore 
gifted unto man precious ore in your circle into the bones married 

Will be our memories that reach into the skies and beyond true 
we make looking back where one smile is a captured vision delight 

Reliving our dream staring into the horizon through the mirror lenses 
a brilliance held with you in the rising sun shipwrecked on paradise

As you part the dead sea bringing life into the deep waters gentle whispers 
bathing within a goddesses temple adoring light filled beams 

Steaming hot out of the mist cotton white clouds on wings 
beholding within the liquid ocean of theses eyes chocolate melting

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/3/2016 2:25:00 AM
These lines are beautiful Liam...keep writing as u always do straight from your heart...Cheers ~Red~
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Date: 5/29/2016 7:09:00 AM
Beautiful sweet love
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Date: 5/28/2016 8:05:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 5/28/2016 7:29:00 AM
The imagery is so so stunning I do love your solo writes but also your amazing collaborations with Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/28/2016 7:20:00 AM
- "The most loving feelings" in your beautiful poem, dear Liam - I wish you a blessed weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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