unrhymed couplets 8 in sixteen lines to say sweet thought
Light of your promise on a scent of a forgetmenot Colouring rainbows sparkle diamond end treasure of the century As gold paints over darkness lifting a heart buried from out of the desert fire burning light of destiny strikes A heart flies blessed igniting sparks the fireworks within flames your candlelight dances glorious The most loving feelings to ever touch begin to explore gifted unto man precious ore in your circle into the bones married Will be our memories that reach into the skies and beyond true we make looking back where one smile is a captured vision delight Reliving our dream staring into the horizon through the mirror lenses a brilliance held with you in the rising sun shipwrecked on paradise As you part the dead sea bringing life into the deep waters gentle whispers bathing within a goddesses temple adoring light filled beams Steaming hot out of the mist cotton white clouds on wings beholding within the liquid ocean of theses eyes chocolate melting
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