Icecream

Cold as ice
But sweet as honey
You made me laugh 
You were rather funny
You were there when I cried
And I thought you'd be there till the day that I died
But when you left 
my heart Broke inside
You left me alone like
Ice cream does when it falls off a cone
Yes, thats it you were my icecream
But like on a hot sunny day,
 you melted away.

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Poet Destroyer A

May 13, 2015 at 12:27 PM

Hi Roxy, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 12, 2015 at 2:23 PM

- A new "poet" at the P Soup :) - I welcome you with your first sweet poem, Roxy :) - I hope you will find much pleasure to share your words and thoughts here with us - Best of luck! - // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

May 12, 2015 at 2:04 PM

ROXY. Thank you for sharing, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT