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Ice-Capped Hillsides

the ice-capped hillsides

are mirrored through the bright lens

of tiny swallows 


HAIKU in 5 7 5 only - Volume 1 
Sponsor: Poet Doctor. The      7/6/2018

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2018

birdwinterhaiku

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Caren Krutsinger

July 8, 2018 at 7:01 PM

Imagery pops off the page, Nette.

July 7, 2018 at 10:07 PM

Pretty!

July 7, 2018 at 12:26 PM

Just lovely Nette, best wishes in the contest...

July 7, 2018 at 1:19 AM

With this heat wave we having your poem was even more enticing!!! :)

July 6, 2018 at 10:39 PM

I am enchanted by the beauty of your haiku, Nette. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

July 6, 2018 at 9:14 PM

Even in three lines I can feel your breath in a write. This is wonderful, Nette!

July 6, 2018 at 10:30 AM

Simply beautiful, Nette ... Thank you for liking my haiku The Rejoicing Past ...

July 6, 2018 at 9:24 AM

Beautifully done Nette.

July 6, 2018 at 7:13 AM

Lovely poem, nette..best for a win.

July 6, 2018 at 5:08 AM

Interesting haiku with an unexpected last line! Birds' have keener sense during this season. Thank you for compliments!

Virginia Waters

July 6, 2018 at 4:36 AM

So Beautiful - love always- V

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