Ice King

Ice that will freeze the heart
shaking icy mountains
roaring like a lion does
thunder echoes around
with ice in hands body turns to stiff
heart faints weaker
Tears fall of cold imprinted on face
beneath his mask lips of lavender 
face as white as a ghost
Fatigue of a warrior 
ice blades that cut razor sharp
heart turned to blue
from harsh torture of his endless soul
among the most powerful 
the king of winters
with ice of bone he conquers all

By

Brian Otoole .......

Poem for  ((skat-oz ICE KING Contest))
08-05-13

(((I held an ice cube today in my palm for almost 15mins in my room with full ac power on held it tightly and after palm froze stiff I imagined the pain of dieing by ice)))
 so I took sub zero picture you posted and it inspired me way more to write this poem for your ice king contest and feel to pain of the ice and cold in palm and in my room.im still very cold now even after this poem
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Date: 8/23/2013 11:45:00 AM
Uniquely creative work..Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 8/19/2013 6:00:00 PM
well done, congrats.
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Date: 8/19/2013 4:50:00 PM
Hi Brian, love this one... congratulations... in the Skitty Skat contest... Linda
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Date: 8/19/2013 2:08:00 PM
- It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Brian! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/19/2013 1:57:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS, BRIAN! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=495082#comments (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/5/2013 12:26:00 PM
- A well written poem for contest Brian - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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