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Ice

Crisp white frosted morning The winter sun just dawning Ice crystals coruscate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/4/2010 1:28:00 AM
Such a beautiful image comes to mind as one reads this, the contrast of cold and warmth captured in 3 lines--and I even learned a new word! Thanks for sharing this Nick, congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/3/2010 7:51:00 AM
I really like the imagery in the opening line in your poem. Nice use of alliteration. Keep on writing. Thanks for the congrats. Karen
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Date: 2/3/2010 4:36:00 AM
I can feel the cold and see the sun. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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