I Won'T

I won't breathe unless you breathe
I won't bleed unless you bleed
I won't be unless you be
Until I'm gone and I can sleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Perkins Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 7:31 PM
yes
Torres Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 1:57 PM
True Love expressed beautifuly. Excellent write. Micahel Torres
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