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I Wonder

For I wonder how this world would be if people didn't judge one another For I wonder if we were all blind would we embrace love more from any nationality For I wonder if we kept corporal punishment in schools would we have so many people killed by our children today For I wonder if parents would teach their children to eat healthy and the reasons why to if fast food places would go out of business For I wonder if our girls were taught that having copulation with so many men they would not only have a Chance of picking up disease but having several different spirits entering their body's would so many of them fornicate still For I wonder because when people judge one another it leads to ..color/nationality causes family to be torn apart due to some individuals loving out of their race..no corporal punishment leads to our children having no structure...fast foods are given majority of the time to substitute for a home cook meal...when our girls realize that if they have a new partner and they recall the prior partner(s) during that moment they should realize that those men left their spirits within their mind body and soul.. For if we read our Daily Word/Bible we would know do not judge and be not judge. Love one another as He loves us. For earthly/natural food were given not only to feed our guts but to cure ourselves instead of depending upon man made/chemical induced foods. Spear the rod spoil the child. You should not copulate not unless you are married. All of these tools leaves us to protect ourselves but many choose to do the latter

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Date: 1/12/2013 5:24:00 PM
I am not religious and i am not God fearing, but this well structured piece you have kindly shared today has made me delve deep. I truly believe we are all part of god and there for we can not do wrong. With out pain how would we know what it is. We have to experience pain to allow our soul to develop. Great poem!!
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Patricia Lewis
Date: 1/12/2013 7:03:00 PM
Although your not religious and you don't fear our creator I'm glad the words that I wrote made you delve deep because I pray to reach you and many others to let them know God is real/we didn't create ourselves / and we have a compass to direct us to avoid some of the pit falls in life if we just followed His word. May you continue to have a pleasant weekend! Simmplissity

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