I Wonder

Each day I wonder
what the feeling is like to
Never need wishes

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2012 9:34:00 PM

very interesting thought in this one!!

Rollo West
Date: 12/30/2012 11:35:00 PM

Hi Andrea, thank you for stopping by and reading this piece. Rollo

Skat A

Date: 12/30/2012 8:06:00 PM

the best haiku maker of the soup. skat

Rollo West
Date: 12/30/2012 8:08:00 PM

Hi Skat, thank you so much for reading my write and your great comment. Rollo

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/30/2012 11:28:00 AM

ha I posted a poem yesterday called I wonder, but love this Rollo and I do wonder what it would be like to never need wishes. Happy New Year Rollo and all the best to oyu and yours xx

Rollo West
Date: 12/30/2012 3:21:00 PM

Hi Mandy, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/30/2012 5:54:00 AM

Wishes are not negatively, Rollo. - Good haiku ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rollo West
Date: 12/30/2012 3:21:00 PM

Hi Anne, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/30/2012 3:07:00 AM

you may never have wrote this little wonder of a poem, Have a Happy New Year...

Rollo West
Date: 12/30/2012 3:20:00 PM

Hi Harry, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Reggae Magnet

Date: 12/29/2012 9:51:00 PM

You would have a replay in life then Rollo where everything is already experienced and you can then predict future events that has already happened, I guess. Nice poser in the poem, still scratching my head for answers.

Rollo West
Date: 12/29/2012 10:03:00 PM

Hello Robert, I know what you mean, I wrote it and still scratching my head. Rollo

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/29/2012 9:37:00 PM

Or maybe what the feeling is like to never have dreams! This is a fabulous write, and I don't think I would like to find out what it would feel like to never need wishes! We all have wishes we'd like to see fulfilled! And dreams! And hopes for that matter! This poem can be seen in so many ways, I really love how this write works, very creative and unique! I really enjoyed reading this phenomenal poem this evening! What a wondrous piece, Great Work!!

Rollo West
Date: 12/29/2012 9:38:00 PM

Hello my friend, thank you so much for stopping by and your great comments. Rollo

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