I Wonder

I wonder 
     what i could do 
          or say 
  to make you like me...
         I wonder 
     what or who
     I need to be
    to be yours... 
       I wonder
when just being me 
   will be enough...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Joseph Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 12:14 PM
when you find the right man...and you'll know..
Richards Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 10:38 AM
What a lovely description of that feeling of unsure love, disquieting insecurity in a relationship. Well penned! ~ Carrie
Bourner Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 10:12 AM
beautiful, i've had this feeling before also. :) Ell
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